What is your opinion?
Author's Thanks
"If your are reading this then you have done me a great honor, you have read my tale. I would like to thank you for taking the time and effort. The very thought that someone, crazed or sane, has read the twisted musing of my imagination is deliciously exciting; succulent even. Since you have ventured into the depths of the darkness and emerged, more or less, unscathed into the comments section please leave a review or -even better- a critique. Why stop the voyage on the last leg? If you find you have enjoyed it and consider it worthy, I would greatly appreciate your vote. Darkest wishes, Fred ."
Mad
"Great story really felt the madness. Would not like to see inside your mind. Little confusing at beginning on first read but even better on the second!"
Dark and unpredictable
"Great story, lovely language . End particularly held me, was well hidden and foreshadowed. Look forward to the next one."
Nice Twist
"Just read your story twist, liked it. Especially the twist which was , well hidden. Enjoyed reading your story. real feeling of craziness and madness. I will be adding one soon, please read and vote."
