What is your opinion?
It has potential
"It starts really well but it begs for more. The premise is interesting and it kept me curious about how the events will unfold. The style was good, there were some artistic elements thrown in but the sentences were not over embellished. A great ending could make this story really stand out. Good job!"
One of the best novels on Inkitt!
"I started reading "Caged" few hours ago and I'm on chapter 7 now. Caged is definitely one of the most addictive stories I've ever read. Thank you so much for writing this novel."
Caged
"Is lacking and needs more. It has potential but is missing a lot."
Nice narrative and descriptors
"I enjoyed the flow, and the use of descriptors, which provided a good glimpse into the interior world of the protagonist. The stilted narrative with short sentences was nice to show the character's thought process--both content and speed/flow. It just needs a bit of polishing and editing work for spelling and punctuation mostly, but these didn't really distract from the reading experience. The first chapter got me interested to see more interaction with the captor, see a bit more of his personality and understand more why the protagonist feels he "loved" her, so it's a good start to a book."
Caged
"This looks great from my first sampling of chapter one... look forward to finishing. Interesting premise! The writing flowed seamlessly, propelling the reader forward, without clunky syntax and diction."
