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One of the best I have read

"I really love your story it's captivating and the writing style is unique I am in love 💕💗"

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Beautiful Story

"Had me hooked from the start. I wish for the author to continue writing beautiful stories such as this one. "

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I don't remember the title

"Everything is good so far. There some I don't understand but the novel is good "

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Great and wondeeful

"I love the whole story I,it was wonderful reading it,and the plot and settings were great but the use of magical powers in the story was not so intriguing"

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The king desire

"U are doing a great job. Love the way the story is turning out. Can wait.to read more. Pls dont stop"

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The King's Desire

"I feel like pretenses are a little muddy, but other than that I'm really loving this book. I can't wait to read more of it! "

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Very unique

"I like that this book went back to the olden times of courts and kings but used modern day slang. Was a refreshing read. Hopefully Fauna and the blue eyed man get to explore some things and the sisters get to escape the hell they are in. "

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The kings desire

"The book is fun but I do not lyk the way he used treating her but so far so gud. I love the plot twist and I am basically in love with the character of atticus although the one with the other seems more romantic "

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Using of power

"I like the story I love to recommended it for my husband"

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The King's Desire

"I really enjoyed this book. I like Flora and Fauna and enjoyed the pacing of the plot. The grammar could use some polishing, and you need to work on your descriptive skills, but other than that, I think this is a great story. Keep up the good work!"

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The book is ok, but I love authors writing style

"This book is okay. There really is no plot. I don't even know what's going on. You're a really good writer, but you just have to learn how to construct your story better. "

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The kings desire

"I like the suspense scene on the novel, I hope to enjoy more on the next chapter, 1 rate 2-3 on the 1-10 chapters. I recommend it this book on any gender from 17up of age "

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The kings desire

"What i did not like is the spelling I would recommend it to everyone "

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Not easy to read

"Story is disjointed and the spelling/grammar/punctuation make it difficult to read. Some promise but needs a lot more depth and refinement "

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King

"Very good work "

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