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Very Intresting!

"Great storyline! Characters were great, some a bit unusual but it all came together! Loved your style and writing!"

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From alpha to Luna

"More plot twists than a pretzel factory combined with fully fleshed out characters makes this one a humdinger of a read. Recommend reading for mature audiences as it has quite a few spicy scenes not appropriate for younger readers. I found myself binge reading a bit and laughed out loud a few times startling the cat. Can’t wait for part two to be finished this roller coaster ride is quite enjoyable and entertaining!"

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From alpha to Luna

"Really really enjoyed reading this book update your next chapter when ready thanks"

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Luna

"Looking forward to the next book.🤩😍 well plotted. Amazing start .. and suspenseful. 😁"

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From alpha to luna

"I loved ever bit of this book most greatest part was when she found her mate and then the journey they went on"

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From alpha to luna

"Wow!! Great read!! Interesting!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Amazing

"Love the story I can't wait for the sequel"

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From Alpha to Luna

"I'm new here, so I haven't been able to read many books yet. However, as my first book on this platform, I have to say I am pleasantly surprised with the quality of this book. Albeit I'm reading it for free, but it's not riddled with grammar mistakes like wattpad. I noticed a few typos but nothing big or really noticeable. I'd definitely reccommend this book to anyone looking for something new and fresh to read! It keeps you hooked from the first chapter and I can't wait to finish it! "

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From Alpha to Luna

"Oh I so hate cliffhangers! This book is so good! I'm totally engrossed in the story and can't wait to read more! "

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Skai

"Good….. I love it🥰🥰🥰🥰😔😔😔"

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From Alpha to Luna

"Loved the characters dialogue cute banter some typos and a couple of times the identity of the characters became confusing. But overall I really enjoyed it and wanted more. I read all first sitting with only one break. Can’t wait to read more about these characters"

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More please...!

"Okay Ms Author.. You can't draw us in like that and leave us hanging. No ma'am! That's pure torture! Torture I tell you! Aaaanyway, I loved reading it. Kept me scrolling and ready to read more! Don't want to say too much but yal will just have to read it for yourselves! "

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Alpha to Luna

"I was pleasantly surprised by this book. A complex background story, fleshed out characters and a entertaining plotline. Some grammar and stylistic issues, but the author is doing her best to tweak and edit. Overall, a good read. Can't wait for the next. "

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From alpha to Luna

"Great story is there a follow up "

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Surprising!!

"So excited she’s added more to the story, very surprising twists! As I’ve been reading others waiting for this one to finish I’ve realized one of my favorite things about her writing (aside from the unusual plots) is she doesn’t KEEP saying “said” as if we are idiots and can’t figure out who’s speaking. It keeps the dialogue going and helps us get more into the story. For this latest excerpt, she’s also been more conscious of typos, I don’t think I noticed any; or I was too into the story to care! "

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From Alpha yo Luna

"This is an amazing read! Funny, romantic, and has a great story line that keeps you wanting to read more!"

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From Alpha to Luna

"Great read!!"

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From Alpha to Luna

"Loving it! Interesting and captivating storyline with hot hot hot scenes 🥵 Writing style is easy to read and engaging. Had some errors I noticed, but I have pointed them out to author, so I'm not going to mark down on those. Thoroughly enjoyable read, looking forward to more updates 🖤🤍"

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Fantastic

"It is a great study story so far. I love it. It different from most of the other supernatural books I've read. "

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From Alpha to Luna

"I will say I' m privilege to read a story like this. I actually read to a point where I felt I can give a candid opinion. I love the storyline and how its flows gradually. I can imagine the efforts put into it, lovely. However, I have this suggestion to make. With a little bit of editing the story will sparkle. Well done and good luck with your story."

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