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I love this story so much, it's page-turning content, its thrill, dark humor and many more.

"I love this story as a whole, it's way of making readers enveloped in its story. Thanks for this wonderful opportunity. I'd recommend this to both family and friends."

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The black pearl

"This book is for fantasy and mermaid lovers like me....with much thrill I like the plot...and also recommend to teens like me to give a try..."

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Best novel and should be converted into a movie

"This book is for those you love fantasy and mystery. Plz read this "

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Awesome

"I really like this story, it keeps me on my toes and I cant wait for what happens next"

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Great story!

"Absolutely loved the story! Really hoping for a sequel! Would love to see what will happen from here on. Thank you so much for sharing :)"

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Black Pearl

"Good adventure and fantasy story with a different and unique twist. Thumbs up!"

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Queens of sea

"From individuals to best friends From archenemy to best buddies From single to group This is the core of book. I love the idea and plot little editing and book will be awesome. Good luck dear writer "

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Mermaid tail

"Fantastic story"

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Awesome

"Great storyline. Some grammatical errors here and there. An amazing story of love,friendship and adventure. This is my second time reading from the beginning to the end and I still love it. Keep up the good work,author.🥳"

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Black Pearl

"I love this book!! I have read it several times and though there could be improvements I applaud the author. I know positive feed back is appreciated!! I enjoy reading about the learning the different character's backstories, and the affects in the overall story! "

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Needs a thorough editor

"The concept here is really strong, but the execution is definitely lacking. Tenses, grammar, etc are all off, with at least one or more errors per 'Page' on my phone. The writing style is almost broken- sentences move into each other awkwardly, and are filled with an excess of "filler words", like 'Had', 'Like', 'A', 'As', 'Has', etc. A huge plot point is revealed within 5 minutes of reading, effectively missing a HUGE opportunity! nice idea, just needs a ton of help on the execution. "

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