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Till death do us part

"I like the concept of love between two different world of beings the immortal vs mortal. Death is usually presented as the grim or a bad omen , but reading death as an angel in a good perspective is totally a different experience . All the very best for the author ."

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Till death do us part

"I loved this story, it's plot is amazing. I am waiting for its next update. Wish you best of luck author."

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Loved this story...

"A tale of romance between death and a mortal. .. The plot was unique and interesting. Characters, blurb, style and theme everything was excellent. A little work needs to be done on sentence formation. Like in chapter 2, there are are many compound sentences, that make it hard to follow. Even if they must be kept use punctuation to help with the flow. Also, there was a sudden jump from normal world to the fantasy. I t would be nice if death would have told her a little about his world or his friends like Gog. Other than that I loved the book and I can't wait for more... Thank Your author for such an amazing read."

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Till Death Do Us Part

"I think your story has plenty of potential, and I hope to see more updates in future! Your writing is clean and easy to read, and I am excited to see when Jimin appears in the story. I do think, however, that your characterisation of your main character could be a little bit stronger to set her apart from the average female character. Apart from that, good job! Best of luck to you and your writing!"

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