What is your opinion?
Gorgeous
"It’s just simply beautiful. The way you write and the way you can structure descriptions makes the story flow in a way that makes the reader breathless. I love the characters and the story so much, it’s definitely a favorite on Inkitt. There are a few slight punctuation mistakes, but it doesn’t distract from the story and they can be fixed easily. You’re a truly amazing writer and I can’t wait to see how everything plays out!"
Beautifully executed
"The first point that got my attention is the way you tell your story. I haven't read a story written in such beautifully poetic way in a long while. The way you use fancy and elaborate words to tell your story is pleasant. My only complaint is the way the characters are described, but that's just me not knowing what your characters are, the way you describe their actions makes it easy to visualize the story. Since this is just the begining of a series, I can't say much of the plot. The idea of a short story to introduce your characters for a later, longer novel is a great idea. I'm looking forward for the next chapter! It's a promising story!"
WOW
"I mean, it's really good. The way you write is simply graceful. It flows easily, you know where to use your words and such. It's poetic, it's touching. There isn’t much you can improve with what you already have, but I would suggest you to give this book one final edit after the book is over :)"
