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Very very good

"Such a good read! I am picky when it comes to horror stories, they need to have a little bit of everything to make them really good and worth the read. Excellent job, congratulations!"

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The Diary Of Jane

"Absolutely thrilling and enjoying read. I strongly recommend this book and story. Loved the plot and suspense"

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Awesome

"I did see a lot of typos but other than that, the story was amazing, I couldn’t take my eyes away from the thrill. So detailed, such enhancement with each chapter. Love it!!! "

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Oh yeah

"I like the fact that this uses more of a “once done, some things cannot be undone,” like in Japanese horror. The emotion left behind takes on a life of its’ own. In this case, Jane’s anger. Bravo!!!"

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Very nice story real nice

"Real nice story ,, like it sooo much "

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The Diary of Jane Worthright

"This bookwas great and kept me reading wondering what was coming next. Really liked it keep them coming."

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The Horror of Jane

"English language and grammar need some work, but you were able to understand what the author meant. It was good that the book had closure but was also left that a sequel could also be written. "

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Good story loved the suspenplotting and killing a time and a good day at work with a good friend was amazing storyline and good writeup got goosebumps and everything

"Amazing book really loved it Story is fasinating and scary Would recommend to friends Like the story line "

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The diary of Jane

"It was so nice and I could not stop reading not even at work I will recommend it to anyone who has a good idea of what to expect from horrors"

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Spooked from start to finish

"A few spelling errors but in whole the novel was well written and deserves so much praise. I was chilled from beginning to end and would love to know what happens next if there will be a sequel. Well done excellent read."

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Diary of jane

"Enjoying plot. Story moves nicely. Flows from chapter to chapter with ease and interest. I would recommend this book to anyone who likes the horror genre."

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Mrs

"I like z way ilhe started the story... And am eager to find what happens at the end"

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The diart of jane

"How it ended i feel sorry for Jacob"

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Excellent

"Gripping and horrifying plot "

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Beautiful

"Really love this book.want to read more from this author "

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Hehs

"H hi I'm so happy for your family and I hope so much fun to you to so I will have a great time and a little bit more hours to go back in time and be a part time job but it will go to a little more work at 4am than "

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Very nice

"🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩"

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Simply awesome!

"This story was so well put together. It was suspenseful, the storyline flowed perfectly and it was full of interesting twists and turns. I found myself getting very involved in the story and read it in just a few hours. I'd really like to read more of this author's work!"

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The diary of jane

"Awesome and scary story, I thought it was great. "

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Well done

"Granted there were some errors here and there. The story was easy to follow and definitely worth the read. The plot was well played out even optional endings were provided. I prefer a story with a happy ending but horror stories tend to end with the idea of the horror repeating itself. This type of ending is typical. The time jumps were okay but left some gaps in her life that would have helped build her character better. The fact that she is so timid and scared of other kids and yet she does not seem to be afraid of ghost needs some explanation. Though it is not a love story it was never clear as to why the conflict between the two boys were mentioned if nothing came of it. Guys just don't bow down that easily especially with the conflict is over a sister or a potential girlfriend. Obviously, the story needs a little work, but I still enjoyed reading it and think in the end it was very entertaining and worth the read. Well, done"

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