What is your opinion?
I like it but it's short
"See I would love to give a lot of praise for the novel. But seeing as it's only one chapter I can't go off on anything that stood out. Like it began we were introduced to two characters that seem to be just regular teenagers. Then the author changed it and even though it was better indeed. Put more witches involved but still, the concrete fact is that it's only the beginning. And I like it and I want to see it grow. And as for other people the person reading this. I think you should read it and then watch it grow."
Great start
"This is really a good start to a teen Thriller. The author must be an amazing young woman. Cant wait to read the rest of the book. "
Intriguing
"I like the setup to this story. We're introduced to a pair of schoolfriends who are about to become involved in a big adventure. There's a teaser prologue that shows the characters are playing for high stakes. And then we're into a world of great dialogue and engaging interactions. I do think a little more attention could have been given to grammar and punctuation. There are a handful of small errors that pulled me out of the story. However, these are minor details and I only mention them as a warning to Grammar Fiends. I'm honestly looking forward to reading more of this title."
Much better beginning!
"Your changes were done very well! I’m curious to know who this woman or witch is, and who was murdered? See, you were able to draw your readers in. Only issues is some grammatical errors and writing style, but I’m sure it’ll improve over time. It happens to all of us. Good job! :)"
