What is your opinion?
Bewitching
"I read three chapters of the Autmn Witch and enjoyed it. Attila and Reggie are characters that have so much potential to develop and come alive. The story itself is intriguing and has the reader asking 'What's next?". Although the first chaper was a little slow, two and three opened it up a bit. The dialogue could use some polishing where the reader could really feel the emotion between the characters. Perhaps a little more detail could be added in, allowing the reacder to visualize the characters and places, fleshing out what is happening in the scene being read. Overall a good read. Good job and keep on writing!!"
Review
"As the previous person said, it's too early to judge, but I'd like to say that the story had a lot of potential. Reggie's character is surely well written, but you could use a few more descriptions and expressions. The punctuations could improve. Keep it up."
Off to a great start.
"The story is off to a great start. I read the two chapters and I find it intriguing. It is too early to criticize or judge. But I do like Reggie's character, his friendship with Atilla. Your writing style is great too. Looking forward to reading the further chapters ☺"
