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Bewitching
"I read three chapters of the Autmn Witch and enjoyed it. Attila and Reggie are characters that have so much potential to develop and come alive. The story itself is intriguing and has the reader asking 'What's next?". Although the first chaper was a little slow, two and three opened it up a bit. The dialogue could use some polishing where the reader could really feel the emotion between the characters. Perhaps a little more detail could be added in, allowing the reacder to visualize the characters and places, fleshing out what is happening in the scene being read. Overall a good read. Good job and keep on writing!!"
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