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Enjoyable

"I truly loved it , I read a lot of books and this was definitely one that kept me interested and excited to see what would happen next. Great storyline. Hope to read more soon ❤️‍🔥"

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The Aldean Heir TheDragoit Flame

"I really enjoyed reading your book. Please keep it up. "

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The Aldean heir

"I enjoyed this book greatly .. thank you for it 😊"

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Great bit of writing!

"Loved the way the story and characters evolved over time. Writing style makes it easy to read and hocks you in. Would love to see more into the main character and her relationship with Tristan, it's a bit choppy. The normal grammar and some word corrections needed, but that did not stop me from not being able to put it down. Thank you for a brilliant read, it breaks me away from my stresses at home."

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Amazing!

"Such a great story! Unique plot, great character development and dialogue. Some repeat spelling mistakes throughout (like Katya being spelled Kathy, or seating instead of sitting or seated) but overall really great. Cannot wait to read the next in this series!!! "

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The Aldean chronicles

"Everything was just perfect,I am craving and screaming for a sequel to a point I got disappointed that it's finished "

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The Aldean Chronicles: Hidden

"I love the characters, the main and the rest . I just feel so drawn to this book like I'm in the shoes of someone so similar to me. I love this ❤️ and I really appreciate the time you took into writing this amazing masterpiece. Can't wait for Book 2😉 I'd most definitely recommend this to both family and friends. Thanks again for this beautiful work of art."

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Funny

"Really liking this novel a lot! It's funny and the plot evolve just like the characters, but not too obvious to not keep you wondering about what's coming next. "

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So good!!

"I loved this book. It’s high school, but not so immature…magic, new world, royalty and finding yourself all mixed together. It’s not a romance but the twist of it was good. "

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The aldean chronicles: hidden

"You expect the story to go to a climax, but nothing is really happening. It's a soft story about the development of a teenage girl. It's well written, I hope the next book will be more exciting."

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Amazing story

"I loved this book. A great story and i was very invested xx"

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The Aldean Chronicles - Hidden

"This is a book I can't put down! It was an enjoyable read! It incorporated elements that I enjoyed: medieval and modern elements, as well as magic and technology."

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There has to be a sequel

"Great story, well developed characters, but needs editing. Most common mistake is using seating instead of sitting. There's other wrong words, dropped words and minor mistakes that need fixing, but totally worth a read. Looking forward to a sequel to see what happens next. "

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I love this book.

"I really love this book so much. I think no I know this is my favorite book to ever ready thank you."

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The Aldean chronicles :hidden

"I loved this book till the end. But I'm unhappy about the ending. It feels incomplete , like there should be a sequel. We need to see Cassie carry through her pledge "

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The Aldean chronicles

"It's amazing and impressive 👌👌so I love it 💓♥️❤️"

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Alden Chronicles

"Entertaining story Looking forward for more. Chapter s about. Cassie's school life. Adventures like Her meeting with monsters Tournament for horse riding and. Rodeos Contest related to science One cannot miss the similarities to Harry Potter "

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The Aldean Chronicles

"I found this book very entertaining. it was a nice change to have it start from a younger age than how they usually start at 18 or higher. I loved how her character develops, something you can see clearly, how she adapts and learns to accept change. however, author, I would like to note out that there were a few small plot holes in the book, and at times it was confusing because I didn't quite understand how she felt, she would scoff and deflect the situation pretty fast and then act like nothing was wrong, so maybe adding more emotion into her would benefit the readers. you have done so well so far, good luck with anything that arises in the future"

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I have some thoughts

"I liked the Aldean chronicles, it was fresh. I'm not sure why the author felt the need to add Arin's character though. Also, I started getting bored towards the end. I'm glad she added that Rypper incident. Also, how has nobody asked how Seb and her [nameless] mother met. I love Tristan, he's kind of my favourite character. I think he and Cassie are really cute together. I like how the book stayed on course, it didn't become ridiculous or unpredictable at the end. I also like how Cassie is relatable and strong, she can get selfish at times but she ultimately has a good heart. I wonder if there will be a book 2, and if it's really neccessary. I don't think Cassie can or should be queen. And shoutout to Grey, doesn't like, neither is he looking for work. Anywho, I love your book, it's one of the best I've read so far on this app. I also love how the protagonist thinks and say 'mom' cause she's American while evreyone else says 'mum'. I thouht it was a typo, didn't catch on till later in the book."

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Greaaat

"Really great story! Will be waiting for next book 😊🌌"

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