49 chapters read
"I have spent hours reading this book and I am so happy that I did! From the characters, to the plot, to the whole story was absolutely amazing! I would highly recommend this book to anyone!! I am actually sad that I reached the end but at the same time, I’m so glad that I read it! Amazing work! You are so talented and cannot wait to read more from you! "
0 chapters read
"From the sweet start to the elated ending, just everything in this book was outstanding!!! I was hooked up till the last chapter. First thing's first, I really liked the plot. The Plot is the main part of a book and if it's good combined with an artistic writing style, a book is always awesome and TRIP GONE WRONG had it all It made the reader blend into the story. The storyline and character development was well-planned. The dialogue delivery was also just like a professional author. I have read other books by Nashra_Pervez, but this is the best. I hope it will gain more success in the upcoming future. Kudos! to the author!"
0 chapters read
"I'm hooked. I really like the way it started and the beginning gets me excited to read more. The writing style was amazing and I really enjoyed this. Great work! Keep going!"
1 chapters read
"Gurl, I am totally hooked. The start was exciting and it felt like I am also gonna go with them to the trip. Its full humor and I like the way you created dialogs Its pretty easy to understand. Grammer is good and everything is amazingly organized and professionally placed. The cover is pretty attractive and usually if I don't like the first chapter I don't read it because I am really choosy and hard to select because its hard for me to like something so I am proud that I could enjoy your story and I can also do review. I didn't even break a sweat reading it so in my POV its really good and there's nothing to change 📖😊"
2 chapters read
"a. Grammar: 7/10. The grammar is good aside from a few clumsy passages and some typos. b. Pacing: 7/10. The pacing feels a little too fast at times. c. Plotting: 7/10. The plot is interesting but not super original. d. Characters: 7/10. The characters are interesting but need better arcs. e. Theme: 6/10. The themes explored here aren't very clear. f. Dialogue: 6/10. The dialogue needs fewer "said" alternatives. g. Prose: 6/10. The prose needs more descriptions. Overall Score: 65%. Pacing needs to be slowed a bit at places, and the plot needs something unique or original to bring to the table, just to make it stand out a bit. The characters need to grow and change and develop a bit more through the story, and the dialogue needs fewer said alternatives. Said is not dead! Prose needs to have more descriptions! As it stands, this story isn't bad, it just doesn't stand out. Give it an interesting or unique spin and work on making your writing a little more interesting."
1 chapters read
"The plotting is on truck and I was more amazed by the grammar plus the writing skills are ok. But you should work on making the storyline interesting from the start. This will help capture the reader's attention and encourage them to finish the story. I myself stopped on chapter 9. Try reading dangerous girls comprehend how to make your plotting more interesting. So far I will rate you a 4 out of 6 for the part I read"