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Truly Magnificent

"I could say that I loved this book, but it wouldn't be enough to sum it up. I felt it. Every single word of it. I hoped with it, loved with it, and cried with it. A lot. I don't know how to express how deeply touching this novel is, how truthfully raw the emotions depicted are, how it can stab your soul and pierce through your heart as steadily as an arrow would do. It is not something about the plot, which, if unsheathed from all the embellishments, would be a rather common one. It is more about the characters. They are all so true and human that it's nearly impossible not to feel what they do. Ada and Sam are something more than the classical youthful star crossed lovers. They are flawed humans that live their lives to the fullest. They love living so deeply and selfishly that the reader is forced to relate to their situation and feelings. This whole book pushes and pull at its reader's chords. In the end you're bound to admit how selfish you are. How much we all are selfish when it comes to our lives and feelings."

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life-changing

"I don't think any words can express how I love this story-- I really do love it. It made me laugh then let me experienced sweetness from how Sam treated Ada and vice versa but most of all, it taught me a lesson of how we must value our time. Right now, while writing this review, I'm still crying (don't laugh at me :<) I don't know why, but the storytelling is great. How you described the venues, the dresses, also the emotions. I can really feel it or imagine every details of it. It's still embedded in my head, most especially the last chapters. I also love how you used multiple languages, additional effort for finding and making sentences in other language other than what you already known. I am not a good critic (I admit it) also not good in english, but I am certainly sure that this story is really good, I don't think I can sleep tonight(?) without thinking and crying about what happened to them. Maybe if I'll still have any spare time, I would love to read this over and over again. So thank you for letting me know their story :) I'll try my best to share them with my friends~ Keep doing what you love, kapatid~ I am willing to support you ^^ "

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Unique shade of me

"My first time review someone ,I am not a critic my self ,But this piece is unique, I love it The girl is a rebel its rare to see this kind of stories now a days its worth to read .....Sorry not finished everything i stop in midway because I am tired I review this 12pm midnight luckily I drop a review for this ....I know your a good writer and Gonna be a best writer one day,I can feel your dedication your time,emotion, and many more...keep it up ,inspired more people,be the best what could this world might offer to people ...Be the best in your unique way ,I know you always work hard... I am someone you know so I Can't introduce myself I bit shy, that's why I could tell.... sorry can't give 5 star :) still your work is vivid don't worry :) you could be a reincarnation of Jose Rizal .. you know me,I always their for you.. I did my best to critic your work I hope I day this chapter published.. no entire stories once finished will be published..... I forward to see your next stories Not a professional critic so my grammar bit rude.. -Brandon Sol"

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