What is your opinion?
Intriguing
"I couldn't stand to see a story with a one-star rating, so I decided to check this out, and I'm glad I did. I completely disagreed with the other reviews. I actually really enjoyed the first chapter. Though it's a little vague, the word-play in it is fantastic! I loved the phrase you used...."overburdened by our own cleverness". Things like this lent a feeling of realism to this story that makes it a little haunting. I like that you take the time to set the stage for your story. It got me hooked, and now I want to see where the story will go. I enjoyed looking at the world through the eyes of your character. It strikes me as a tale of survival and rebuilding. The idea of the "bunker" type place where the protagonist is hiding reminds me of a novel called Wool (I can't remember who it's by, but it was a fantastic story). The writing was very clean and polished. I would definitely read more of this, and I hope that you put more up on the site. Great work so far!"
Garbage
"And he calls Dapharoah's magnum opus trash?????? This bull hurt my eyes to read. No wonder he's angry. P.s. He's finishing the third book and he said on his Facebook page that book 4 and 5 is coming. I love when my black brothers shut you hating white folks down. Die slowly."
Shakespeare he's not
"Don't waste your energy folks. For someone that is giving one star ratings on every story on the site, he most certainly can't judge with this lack of imaginative storytelling. Oops, I'm sorry. Even that is giving him too much credit."
Lame, Lame, Lame
"Dapharoah69. Da, slang for "the." Pharoah is spelled wrong because its symbolic, as I expressed in my autobiography The Kingdom. It reminds me of my white first grade teacher when I spelled it wrong and she said I'd never be nothing in this life and that blacks were only slaves and never Kings and Queens. So know what you're talking about before you talk, bum. I am sorry that I took 10 minutes out of my schedule to read your one chapter disaster. There's a reason this lame, non imaginative story is unfinished. He's too busy dropping one star ratings on three different stories because he's jealous. This is a site for supporting one another as authors, not a site of hate. This story to needs stay one chapter. Any author that comes on my page insulting my readers deserved to be called out. My Facebook followers that has followed me for ten years, my husband, my nieces and friends read my book and love it. His review was made out of bias and bigotry and that's NOT going to stop me from achieving greatness.You mad? If you love Shakespeare, a plagiarist by the way, then your story doesn't reflect your taste. I have 8 Barnes and Noble bestsellers, over 1,000 (5) Star reviews, featured in 2,000 + book clubs, five author of the year awards, 4,000 preorders for The Law of Beasts, Man of Integrity award from a U.S. Senator in October for my career achievements and being a community leader since being homeless ten years ago, I've worked with New York Times Bestsellers. If my readers say I'm a genius then deal with it. You'll get over it. DON'T READ THIS STORY. It's a waste of time. Now you enjoy your day and take some creative writing classes because you suck worse than a bulimic chick slurping erections for the taste. Don't come for me bitter fool becuase I will clap back. Get on my level, then we can talk. Deuces."
