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What is your opinion?
HOSTAGE
"I love the story and the way you intend to pattern it. Honestly not much to be said, but to encourage you to develop the characters to their expected potentials and structure the story to grasp more attention, bring in the suspense, and all that... I love the energy behind the story and the ongoing presentation of it, quite a brilliant effort thus far. Overall, going well, seems good!"
Good Book
"It's a very nice book. The characters keep you hooked and the plot looks like it's been well thought out. Only a few chapters have been published but I will be waiting for more. The only thing you can work on a little more is shortening the sentences cause it sounds a little wordy. It's an amazing book and I can't wait for more."
