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Great

"Great story, would love more like this."

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Indebted to the Vampires

"Definitely keeps the readers interested. Much earlier to follow than many others with this many points of view."

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M Reverts

"This is such an awesome story. The author has made it extremely fun to read. I can’t wait to see how the whole dynamic of the characters works out. "

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Indebted to the vampires

"It’s cool that it has the outran high school host club vibe without being the same and the main character while sometimes dumb isn’t unbearable."

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Amazing

"Where is the rest of the book? I’m loving the story so far. "

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A different vampire story

"A different way to build a vampire story One girl and a family of vampires trying to find a way of living together "

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Very good!

"I loved this story! It captivated me throughout!"

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Wanted by the vampires

"I like I very much It just pulls u in"

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Nice

"Nice story line, continue the good work author "

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Seriously just gonna leave it hanging??

"Great story to enjoy I really wish it was finished. Would love to see the outcome If she ends up staying there becoming more of a like a sister to the brothers but still maid they care after or does she hook up with Antoine??? Don't keep us waiting please"

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Indebted to the Vampires

"Funny and sexy, very intertaning."

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Can't stop reading

"Very interesting plot, well written. Needs some editing, but it doesn't effect the quality. I especially like the different POV's and the subtle way all details are reveiled. Surely recommand it to everyone who likes reading vampire stories!!"

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Indebted to the Vampires

"It’s good! Glad there’s a second book because the ending is a cliffhanger."

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Nice

"Good writing, hope there is more to come... "

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Indebted to the vampires.

"I'm really enjoying it so far. The tension, the characters description, everything is so rich and tasteful."

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Hooked

"It's been one of my favourite vamp book to date ! I love how the story unfolds bit by bit. Not too fast paced and not too slow either. I enjoy the depth of the characters, though it wouldn't hurt to go even deeper. One of the downside (but also strength) of the story so far is that the universe is limited to the estate. I feel like there should be a little more interaction with side characters.... I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the book !"

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Good

"Very good story 👍 "

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Good, but not complete

"I really enjoyed it so far, but you should not call this story complete, because it isn't. If that was the ending, then it lets the rest of the story down. If there is another part coming, could you not let us know. Not trying to discourage you, but as a reader it gets quite frustrating just reading half a book, which is why I chose to read a book that was complete. Please finish the story so we can appreciate it. Would love to read the rest."

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Gets Better and Better

"I love the character development in this book, it’s gotten more interesting as the chapters continue. Beware it abruptly ends in a strange place so this is not a stand alone book. But the author has started the second book so don’t panic. Can’t wait to see where they take this story. "

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Indebted to the vampires

"Exciting and humorous and sexy I love the characters and the story line very much!"

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