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EXCELLENT

"TERRIFIC STORY"

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Space

"Quite the story. It was promising and kept the reader wanting more. Excellent sci-fi story."

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Space Bus to Benton's Colony

"Story line is similar to a "western" except that instead of riding horses or carriages, the characters ride a space ship. I could swear the bit about the "drunk" was very similar to a character in a western movie I watched years ago. Despite the numerous typos, a good read."

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Space bus to Benton’s collony

"Enjoyed the story. Action, heroes and damsels. The style was good enough that I could see the story in my mind. Well done"

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Unique

"A unique and fantastic plotline. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Space bus to Benton's Colony

"Cool story, a little bit of Star Wars and some of River with no Return, sci-fi mixed with Western and a very realistic and sarcastic humour on the working of power. Loved this story and would like to read more. "

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Fantastic

"Beautifully written and with a very good end . For a new one"

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GREAT!!

"Love the story, at the end it is a western story, simple, yet giving hints and pieces of the situation that is happening all over ravencroft´s universe. easy to read and always keeping with the main stream story I want to keep reading about, Olafson´s adventures."

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Classic Space Western

"This is a great story, mainly because of the uniqueness and variety of the characters. There's also several mini story lines occurring underneath the main plot. Some of the plot twists towards the end are unexpected and twist at your heart strings a bit. The punctuation and grammar could use some reworking, but overall, it's a great medium length sci fi western."

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Graphanon

"I really enjoyed reading these chapters"

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Space bus

"Nothing like a nineteen seventies western set in the future of human space exploration and development, with a gunfight on main street at the end, just like High Noon. "

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