What is your opinion?
In The End
"This is one of those stories that when you've finished it you're left thinking hmm. Not a thing that makes go hmm but a good hmm. If that makes any sense. It's a very good read will be checking out your other works. I like your writing style too."
Excellent
"This was an amazing short story I loved it"
In The End
"I thoroughly enjoyed this short story. It had meaning but stayed organic through the whole telling of a desperate situation. That's so way to go, though. Great job author!"
In the end
"Beautiful! What a way to go. Almost wish this was a REAL option in life. It would be a no brainer. Keep up the good work. Loved it."
In the end
"Insanely intense short story absolutely loved it ❤ "
In The End.
"Nice work. Sustain the buildup."
In the End
"A simple and very straight forward short story, but wow 😍. Weird AF and beautifully written at the same time- I loved everything about it. Kudos to you, author, well done👏💜"
In The End i
"Weird as hell but absolutely bloody loved it "
In The End
"What a way to go… but it’s what she wanted. Very interesting way to put it. The author hasn’t disappointed me yet. Loved the story. "
In The End
"The story was very straight forward. In spite of the story being short, Alanah made the plot very convincing. Both of her characters were determined to complete their mission and used each other to make sure they were both totally satisfied. I Love the way it was written. I can’t wait to read another one of Alanah’s stories. "
Aww!!!
"Really loved this story!!! "
Intriguing
"I liked the simplicity of this story. There was no growth or character development because of how short it was, and to me it made perfect sense. Two "people" looking for different ends and finding it in each other. There was no need to grow because they certain in their decisions. Certainty is not something I see often in writing.There is a morbid kind of comfort within the aloofness and determination, the type of empty that can be reread. "
A Uniquely Enjoyable Death
"I find myself really quite enjoying this story. The plot is short and concise, the themes are a little depressing, but nonetheless I properly enjoyed reading it. It's a unique dive into a wish for death that gets sated in a gentle way. My advice to the author would be a quick run through to pick up spelling errors and grammatical oddities, but otherwise it's great. My request would be for more, but it feels finished and complete as it is. "
