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Spirits

"This is a good book. I like the way you have separated the sections so we know the point of view is changing. "

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The case of the bone freak

"This is a very gripping story, although the paranormal world is something I tend to avoid but this story had me on the edge of my seat. The author has a great way to keep the reader engaged in the story. Very well written with great description. I look forward to reading case 2."

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Good.

"I really enjoyed the story. It is well written and kept me intrigued."

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Bone crucher 01

"The story was great kept you interested and was well written. You did very well."

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Bone freak I really enjoyed is very good and scary

"I really enjoyed it I don’t have nothing negative to say about it I really enjoyed it as a very good scary story t to sit around a campfire "

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Case of the Bone Freak

"I enjoyed reading this little tail. It mixes paranormal occurrences with everyday life and focuses on the city's crime division as the detectives search for the bad guy. This story is fun for anyone, like me, who enjoys the cops and robbers stories. This author has grown exponentially throughout his writing. There are still a few quirks that need to be worked out, but the book was easy to read and I look forward to reading the next chapter."

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Manifestations of an Intriguing Paranormal Crime Series

"This is the start of an intriguing crime series in a world where paranormal occurances are commonplace and accepted. TimidonNodimit excels at drawing the reader in with realistic characters and great scene development. He introduces new concepts easily, making the revelations of this world feel natural, while keeping you on the edge of your seat, waiting for the next surprise. There are some grammatical and tense issues, but definitely not a hindrance to the ease of reading. A little polishing will make this story shine. I very much look forward to reading the next in his upcoming episodic series! 👍 😊 "

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Fantastic world-building

"So far the story feels original not only because of the plot but thanks to the characters and writing style as well. There are grammatical and spelling issues to fix but beyond those, it's a promising start. I loved the originality of this story. From the way it's written to the unexpected plot, Case Collection is unlike anything else I've read on Inkitt before. I'm reluctant to write a definitive review based on what I've read of an ongoing novel. There are definitely things that could be improved, but I already know this story stands out. Sean is a perfect example of a morally grey antihero. He's dangerous and unapologetic, but his sense of justice makes him the perfect match for K's quest. There are so many different characters but the author managed to give each of them a very distinctive voice. Both detectives at the MCD, the Helsing Group, and the Church, all bring something new to the story and their interactions are an awesome display of reluctant companionship. I look forward to meeting the real evil in this book. There's already a great team to fight against whatever the author can conjure."

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Nice book

"This book has a lot of potential and I would love to read more of it. Though not a fan of science fic, I found it very interesting with a unique theme. It would be good if you introduced the characters first as pacing to know the character is a bit slow (with the hint of mystery) Overall, A good book to read."

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