Great story
"I am glad that everyone got a happy ending! I loved this story "
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"I am glad that everyone got a happy ending! I loved this story "
"Another great story!"
"I love the story with its twist and turns. I also like the fact that it shows life can be unpredictable and almost impossible to believe. Thank you author for sharing your beautiful story."
"Very good reading. I enjoyed the book."
"I feel a lot of it was rushed and found a few minor errors, but in the end, I really enjoyed it!"
"This is a good book! Great Job!"
"It was a beautiful ending. Why did their sister have to get with Abby's ex? She was already having problems with nutty stalkers. I know her ex did nothing wrong but he should have distance himself from his ex. All in all they became one big happy family. Keep up the beautiful and great works. May God bless you with your creativity."
"There’s about 4 books’ worth of drama in this one short story. It was well edited but far too busy a plot"