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Malignus

"The story reveals an amazing richness. Everything thing seems to be near perfect and that is a trait of a good writer. At some point, the story sounded poetic and that was a mixture of good taste. Brilliant effort, Keep the story going."

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Really Good!

"I love, love, LOVE your writing. It’s so fresh and detailed. You are a really good author and I hope you keep it going! The chapters have so much going on within them! "

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Fabulously written.

"I think the author has done an amazing job with this story, the imagination and creativity pulled into making this world is absolutely wonderful. I had some most unfeminist thoughts while reading this (going against my name, hehe) and Orynicus will forever haunt my dreams."

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