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Judge from the writer's community!!
"Ok so I will start off from the Grammar & Punctuation, it's too perfect, you really have a rich vocabulary which makes it interesting and helps avoiding same words. I read 4 chapters and so far I haven't seen any grammatical errors. The summary is really catchy!! Now to your writing style, first of all it seems you like to write conversations so much like the conversation's seem never ending which gets kind of frustrating, by the way it's not a bad thing but personally for me I like to read directly about the plot. Next thing, I would suggest to update your Book Cover, make it more attractive with illustrations like for example your story is kind of related to technology so make something blue or like the wires one, something catchy! The Plot is surely amazing, I like books which start with school scenes because that's kind of reader I am. The biggest coincidence is this book is related to Hybrids and recently at school I just studied about it ! Another pointer is you should really like put who is the one who said this because it get's confusing while reading the conversation when you don't know who is speaking it. Even though, your story plot idea is interesting and different but it isn't intriguing I mean there should be something that curiosity eats the reader and forces them to read more!! On top of all, I am surely amazed about your story plot, like how these ideas came into your head because the plot point and all is so different and for that you surely have a imaginative & creative mind of a writer!!! So as you can see, I judged from you grammar skills to the plot deeply so It was an fun experience reading & reviewing your amazing piece of work !!! 🥰😊 Regards Your Judge from The Writer's Community Aashion"
Great concept
"The author shows an excellent handle of the English language. I am always impressed by authors who write outside of their native tongue. The characters are well crafted and the concept is well-executed and intriguing. The pacing could use a bit of work in the beginning but I loved the book and hope it does well! Well done to the author! "
Human Before Superhuman
"Aside from a few grammar mistakes there’s nothing else to point out. What this story manages to do, and get right is the characterization of its cast. Normally you would expect a story a bout people with superhuman abilities to be more action focused but not this one. This story treats its cast as it should. They are people first and superhuman second. "
Very well done!
"I didn't expect to finish your story so quickly, but it was a real page-turner. I love everything about it; the plot, the writing style, the little bits of humour. Your character personalities were very well done and I just love how unique they are. The only constructive feedback I can add is that there were a few typos and grammar mistakes, but that's it. Besides that I can't find a single problem and you should be very proud :) Good job!!"
Amazing story!
"All right so: fresh idea - check nice grammar - check excellently developed plot - check What's there left to work on is your writing style. It gets tedious somewhere in the middle of the chapters, and I think it's because of writer's block or something. That happens. I know writer's block is kind of a bitch, but don't write while you're in a mood. Write when you feel like it. Don't force yourself - it honestly really helps to take a break and relax, and wait till the ideas come to you, instead of having to wrack your brains to chase new ideas for some kind of plottwist that'll probably end up boring once you've typed it down anyway. Try to read more, it helps generate more creativity in your head. I've got a lot of book recs to reccommend, you can drop a message on my wall and ask anytime. I'm always available.... mostly. I hope my advice helps you with your future writing projects. P.S - I'm really sorry for the late review - I was supposed to do it months ago but my Inkitt wasn't working"
Cool
"The beginning was everything that you could want except for action. Like no action in the entire story. And I was expecting at least a little action from the father. But I'll be honest. Um, I was very bored reading everything after chapter 12. I thought since he was going somewhere where super humans would be that powers and stuff would be more apparent. But that wasn't the case and it was the downfall for me. It was hard getting into a book where no action existed. I loved the first 12 chapters with a passion. And if you like a slice of life mixed with fantasy aspects the go-ahead this story is for you. But for me, I didn't like a few things. The spelling and grammar were off. Just a tad nothing to get your panties in a wad. So that wasn't a big part of it. What I didn't like was that the main character was bland and expressionless. And that kinda killed it for me. And the plot for the first twenty chapters should have been cut off and began at chapter 14 or should have kept going with the slice of life aspect at home with his family. I give this a four-star because personally I didn't like it but there is no real reason just to give it fewer stars. So to the writer, your book is worth five to the right person. I'm just not that person. I hope you continue writing. It was a fun experience reading your book.!"
