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staring at my reflection

"I enjoyed reading this, it did make me think on the point that was being made about self image and how the media can destroy this by encouraging people to make unfavorable comparisons. It went on to show the internal anguish and conflicts this caused. In that way it made the impact that it set out to make.without making the reader feel uncomfortable. I particularly liked specifically the few lines about direct comparison with eyes, legs, thighs, those lines worked well, like a new twist on William Blake, Why was I born with a different face. Thank you writer, enjoyable.."

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