Six Spires

"Another excellent story by this author. It was well written and is very promising."

The Six Spires of Egtor

"It was great, like all of your work, but the ending left a lot out! Keep creating, I love all of your books!"

Reader

"I'm enjoying the story and the concept of the Union. I have read other stories in the series and enjoyed them. I look forward to reading others. Sadly I sometimes find layout difficult to understand in that it is sometimes not easy to associate text to characters. However the most difficult thing is the poor use of language and punctuation. I am sorry if this offends but for me it jars badly."

Mr but iujko

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I have learned the authors style, and I'm enjoying it immensely.

"Reading tempo has slowed enough to enjoy the nuances of this writers style. That's a good thing."

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Review

"Vanessa I have read all your stuff on Lulu and Storiesonline. I do like your stories. I think you write very well and they are interesting. I am less sure I like the whole transvestite thing with Eric. This story has not progressed for eons, much like most of the stories. I read this ages ago and not a step farther. Nothing new for ages. I would love to see some progress, In fact I thought you were dead its been so long since anything has happened. You no longer have a blog and there is no place for communication. Please continue. Also having stuff up then down is discomforting. I have read most of it twice. Lots of great ideas."

Can’t remember

"Plot development seems slow, but I know it takes time. A few instances of the wrong word use in the sentence.i want to read. I don’t want to write. Goodbye "