What is your opinion?
The Unexpected
"This book is a good story and I would like for people to enjoy as it is written by me so please enjoy "
The unexpected
"I like the plot and the idea of the book. Both points of view sometimes show the same thing. I was little bored by it but eventually, it moved to the next level :) Nice work, keep it up."
Goo plot
"I like the plot of this story, however the writing style and grammar needs improvement as some sentences are hard to understand and are not written as properly."
Nice Attempt
"I liked the plot idea you came up with, but your writing style isn't my favorite. If this is your first attempt, good job; however, I recommend that you read more; this will help you develop your writing style in the future. I believe you could revise this and make it a great story with some edits; keep writing:)"
