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Has incredible potential
"Hello, I'm sorry for the late review. I quite liked the story plot and where it was heading but I believe maybe you could've lengthened or added much more before it all changed for Sona. For example, show us a usual routine in his day and so we could get to know as more of a person. I'd recommend re-reading it but overall, this story has incredible potential and I look forward to more chapters."
Has Potential To Be Wonderful
"It's a good storyline so far. The only issues I had were the run on sentences and the dialogue being kind of robotic. I loved the character descriptions, which seem to be your strength. Stick with it, practice makes perfect!"
