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Untitled

"Interesting story. I enjoyed reading it. Very good job of hiding the murderer until the end. Nice coming of age story. :)"

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Fabulous!!!

"The story has been nicely woven with intricacies. I love the way you have visualise, and also the hidden debate of books and apps. The way you have a interlaced the plot with mystery, paranormal activities and morals... Its a refreshner. I loved it, adore it and get fully involved with it. Thanx to u author for ur wonderful rendition. "

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Untitled

"It was a very good read. The characters were well placed and true to their parts. I like the suspense and the few twists and turns."

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Great! :D

"i loved reading this book! i cant wait to read more books that hold a similar plot and characters. Great job to the author and keep writing! <3 -bookheaven101"

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Well Done

"The story was well written and just enough information was provided to keep you guessing as to who killed her grandmother. It all came together at the end. Even though we don't really know for sure who her grandfather is enough information was provided to make you feel sure that you know the answer. I love how smoothly the story flowed. Once he captured her at the library I couldn't stop reading. I loved this from the beginning to the end. There was no long drug out boring moments. I saw very little if any errors in grammar or punctuation. It still needs a title. I certainly look forward to reading more of your writing. Well done."

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Untitled

"I loved it its mysterious and just good "

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untitled

"This was a very unique story set in New York City where a grandmother who worked in a library was murder, because she wouldn't give up a secret to a crazy young man who was hunger for money. I enjoyed the story very much because of its mystery, twist, secrets and adventures. I also wonder why you titled the story untitled?"

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Thrilling

"This is a mysterious and puzzling story of a young girl going through a lot to find out many things that were unknown to her during her life and her journey starts because of and after her grandmother’s death. It is very exciting and thrilling and I could not keep my eyes away once I started reading it. Zoe found the answers to some of the questions that she had and found out maybe even some things she was not questioning, but she also did not find out everything and I get the feeling that this story is not finished yet. However, if this is the ending, it is a great one, since it left me in suspense and made me think about the story for a long while after finishing it. Overall, I really enjoyed this story and I would highly recommend it."

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Intriging story

"Intriging story, curious hoe this story Will end, "

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Untitled

"I love the plot. The story had my attention from the first chapter to the end. I wish the detective and our heroin hat a romance going instead of assuming of romance in the future. I would recommend this book to all my friends"

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"several grammatical errors "

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Untitled

"It was a cool book. Avery good start if you're a beginning writer Keep at it!"

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B00k

"It's plot Friend Net Fine"

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Boring

"Because the plot is pretty boring, the main character of the book doesn't have a character, I wasted my time "

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