What is your opinion?
Creepy Thursday's
"The creepiness of the opening chapter was such a good idea and then it went to basics love making ending in a good seduction. Where did Thursdays go and when did the horror story get to? You see it did not mix well for me there has to be real meat then more meal time. Intermixed. Sorry that is a metaphor."
Creepy Thursday
"Has potential but needs to be edited and worked on. The story was very gripping and captivating. The emotions are strong in the story."
Creepy Thursdays
"When writing a description, it should be more captivating, enticing...ya feel me? There's a thin line between show vs tell and sometimes we tend to overlook it as not being important. But it is because when I read the first line, you were telling me. No I don't want that but I like how you kept it original and your writing style *chef's kiss* I'll always be here to give y'all that tuff love advice YOU need to hear."
