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WOW!!

"This is a great book. The plot seems really well developed and thought out, and it's one of those that isn't quite a slow burn but at the same time, the plot moves slow enough to keep you at the edge of your seat. This is an amazing story so far and I can't wait to read more."

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Nice work :)

"I really enjoyed this one. Great plot and amazing writing skills. I could imagine all the stuff you wrote. Perfect! Thank you for sharing:) "

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Can you help us?

"I really loved the detailed explanation of the littlest of things. And I love the build. Chaya seems like one of those characters whose growth would be tremendous"

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Nice!

"I think this was so far a really good book. The plot is good and the story overall is great. I enjoyed the writing style along with the small humor here and there. Keep up the awesome work!!!"

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Good writing skills!

"Honestly, this seems like a really great book, and I am glad that I have stumbled upon it. So thank you! For your plot, I could feel it accelerating with your chapters available. It is strong, and please continue to let it be like that. For your story structure, it really took time, and it paid off. You took your time explaining what your main character is going through, and you even had the time to make the person she is communicating with mysterious along the way. I think there will be a big blowout to all of this later on in the book, but I don't wish to deter you of your plans for your book. Character development was right on the spot, and I loved it! My gosh, you really are a great writer. If there is a need to do something to add perfection to your story don't hesitate to do so. I really saw how much work put into this, and it is going to pay off. Keep going at it and great work! Loved it!!"

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