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Raven's Feathers: The First Feather

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Summary

What happens when you have a personal angel on your shoulder which protects you all the time, or better when you have a ghost that looks out for you and is just a bit possessive of you. Read the full story if you also want to know... PS: I'm writing and editing as we go. More chapters coming soon...

Status
1yr ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter One: Raven’s First Feather


The night was a biting, relentless cold. Wind sliced through the street like a saber, chilling Josh to the bone as he trudged home under the dim glow of flickering streetlights. His coat was zipped up as tight as it could go, hands buried deep in his pockets, shoulders hunched against the storm.

It had been a strange few days—days that felt like they were unraveling, thread by thread. His parents had sat him down with somber faces, and told him he was adopted. Found at the side of a highway, abandoned like a broken toy, left to fend for himself. How could someone do that? Leave their own child behind? The questions pounded in his mind, jumbled and unanswerable.

His mind replayed the scene. The moment Jack, his best friend, had an accident. They’d been arguing fiercely—their voices a storm of frustration—and Jack had stormed off. Josh’s anger had boiled over. Without thinking, he yelled into the night, “I WISH YOU WERE DEAD.” The words had burst out of him like a curse, hot and uncontrolled.

Suddenly, a branch from the ancient oak tree swayed, then snapped with a deafening crack. It hurtled through the air, piercing the darkness—and right into Jack’s windshield.

The memory sent a shiver down Josh’s spine. Jack had survived, barely—a miracle, the doctors called it. But every time he thought about it, the echo of the paramedics’ words haunted him: *Luck. Absolute luck.*

Why was all this happening? Why was everything spiraling so fast—so utterly out of control?

As he reached the corner of the street, a strange sensation prickled at the back of his neck. He slowed, glancing over his shoulder. The street was empty, save for shadows dancing in the wind.

Then he heard it—soft footsteps behind him, steady and deliberate, like someone—or something—walking just out of sight. His breath hitched, heart pounding a drum in his chest.

He froze. Every hair on his body seemed to stand on end. The wind carried a faint whisper, almost like a sigh—then the sound of a faint flutter. Josh's eyes widened as he noticed a tiny, shimmering feather drifting down from the dark sky, twirling lazily in the cold air. It was black, glossy, and strangely warm to the touch even in the icy night.

His hand hovered over the feather, trembling. Suddenly, a whispered voice echoed inside his mind—soft, protective, almost possessive.

"I’ve been watching you, Josh."

He spun around, eyes darting into the shadows. His pulse was loud, deafening. Whatever was behind him was close—and it wasn’t human.

A chilling breeze brushed past him, and the feather floated gently into his palm, as if chosen just for him.

He stared at the shiny, black feather as a shiver wracked his body.

Was this the start of something strange? Something beyond his understanding?

And as the night’s darkness seeped deeper into his bones, one thing was certain: he wasn’t entirely alone anymore.

Someone —or something —had claimed its place beside him.

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