Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

Shakled

"It felt as if I was there. The details were good. Please keep going I think it's amazing. Don't lt anyone tell you different.,keep writing. Excited to read more. If there's a part two, please do it "

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Like it :)

"I read half of it and it is nice peace of work. Easy writing and good plot. Maybe little editing would help with spelling mistakes. Other then that, I like it so far. Keep it up :) "

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Chained

"Well it's a gud story"

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Needs some work

"I like the idea of the story, I think you should keep going with it. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes in there but that's okay you can always go back and fix them. overall good work, keep going :)"

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Shackled

"I liked the idea of the book like what the author was going for but there was a lot of spelling mistakes a few is fine everyone makes mistakes but there was a lot which at times made some stuff hard to read."

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Good

"I like this book so far it needs some improvements on the grammar side of things but I thought the plot was very interesting, well done keep writing!"

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