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Need more!!

"This book is incredible! Great job! I couldn't put it down! But PLEASE PLEASE keep writing it! We need more!!"

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What if he didn't die?

"I really like this book because its very interesting and kind of mysterious and abit scary and yeah, I love it so I have to rank it with 5 stars.! "

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WHAT IF HE DIDNT DIE

"This is a very good read I really enjoyed all the plot twist but I want Daniel to be alive so bad😩😩I can’t wait to see what happens next please when does the next chapter comeout?"

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Ongoing story?

"Still in progress?"

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What if he didn't die

"I liked everything about the story line the characters it held my interest easy to read couldn't put down "

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Beautiful story!

"What a roller coaster ride! I just couldn't stop reading it till the end. I was hoping that Daniel was alive, but nevertheless great story author. You should keep writing, would love to read more books. "

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What if he didn't do

"This is emotionally inspiring and breathtaking. The first sentence drew me in. Very very talented and has such incredible accommodation to come up with a story like this. Highly recommended that everyone read this "

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What if He Didn't Die

"Emotionally riveting. The reader is forever searching for the incomprehensible truth to what really happened🌹"

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Fantastic work

"Can't wait to read more. Upload soon please. The story is suspenseful and mysterious. I'm waiting for Bella to take revenge on every preceptors. "

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What If He Didn't Die?

"It's a great tear-jerker lol Anyway great suspense I couldn't stop reading once I began. With a twin like that who needs enemies? I hope Dan is still alive somehow even if I know the chances are barely nil. Goodd plot tho engaging read!"

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😍loving it

"I want dan to be alive"

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Good story🤍

"I like the story,it was exited so far,hope that it will be the best story that I read in a last time,thank you for this story🥰😀"

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What if he didn’t die

"Liked it all My friends Coz it’s worthy it"

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Its amazing

"Just marvelous cant wait to see what happens next"

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What if he didn’t die

"This started out a little slow but has gotten more interesting as the story continues. "

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I’m not sure he’s alive

"I like this book very much. It is very interesting, although, I don’t like the way Easter allows them to bully her. The writing style of the author make it easy reading material."

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What if he didnt die?

"This book is amazing! Even when there isn't much going on I'm hooked! Can't wait to see the end keep up the great work author!!"

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KHOSI 2

"THE SUSPENSE IS SERIOUSLY KEEPING US GLUED TO THE BOOK.EASTER AND DANIEL COMPELS US TO FOLLOW THEIR LOVE MESS.PLEASE UNTANGLE OUR MESSED UP ANXIETY."

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Clever plot!

"For me personally, this is an unique plot and storyline that I have stumbled across. The writing is excellent and I love the detail of it. Without the background or back plot, the story line would flounder. I find it brilliant! "

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What If he did not die?

"I love the way the story is narrated. It takes you right into the story and make you feel it is happening to you. Love the plot and its getting more interesting. Can't wait to know the concluding part."

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