What is your opinion?
Very promising start
"I'm usually not big on werewolf/mutant stories but I must admit your narration got me seriously hooked-on from the very beginning! I really like the way the plot takes us right to the epicenter of action, without any lengthy introductions or explanations! At the same time, thanks to your very detailed scene descriptions, it's really easy to visualize the described events in your mind and understand how this post-apocalyptic world designed by you works as you continue reading on. The same goes for understanding of the characters introduced throughout the narration. The depiction of action scenes is definitely your strong suit - the fights feel extremely dynamic and intense, and when you read them you almost feel like watching a movie or a game video. However, since you position this story as a 'Sci-Fi/Romance' novel, I only wish there was more emphasis placed on psychologism and analysis of the characters' feelings and emotions. Otherwise, very promising start so far, so I can't wait to find out how the plot is going to develop further. Thank you very much for drawing my attention to this novel of yours! Wish you every success in your writing!"
Anger
"The anger that is portrayed by the main character was sad with a dash of oh shit anger. The best emotion portrayed so far was chapter one. The second chapter could have used more detail but either way still a good read and a good couple of chapters."
Amazing!
"First, I love your writing style. It is amazing. I could literally picture everything you described. Second, plot twist is also interesting. I really like these 2 chapters which I read so far, great. And third, characters. Perfectly written and I look forward to next encounters :) "
Vivid description, clear plot, great characters!
"I absolutely loved these two chapters. It’s not everyday that I get to read someone else’s work that I actually enjoy. I’m quite picky, honestly. But as I read this, I loved that every character you introduced was very clearly distinguished from the others; the settings were very detailed; and the plot is very structured. I could also imagine the accents of each character as they spoke (if any of them had one). I literally could picture this book, as it already is, being animated into a video game, or a Netflix series. "
Transmuted
"I think it is well written and the plot is exciting. It is not a writing style I enjoy. I think it is great for people who need help visualizing things because there are very specific details. I prefer more character dialog. The action scenes with out giving me a reason to invest in the people don't pull me in and make me want to keep reading."
