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thrilling

"really amazing hook! i love the group set up and the pluck off trope is used well, could use foreshadowing but overall a really solid entry!"

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Fabulous

"This novel was just awesome...I loved it... looking forward to more of your works😊"

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Six Feet Under

"This was amazing. The crazy amounts of twists and turns in the story made my skin crawl. 10/10 would recommend!"

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Six feet under

"I gasped, speechless, stunned no words can describe how good this book is, like I absolutely enjoyed this, I love how Erin wasn't forgiven or any of them because they were sorry or less involved or because they did it because they didn't have a choice, I love how they all paid for their crimes..... I'll rate this book 100/10 😌❤️‍🔥 an absolute read guys"

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Great

"By far the best novel I’ve read on here. I thoroughly enjoyed this"

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Nice plot

"The plotting of the story is great"

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The story is breath-taking. I can't describe how I felt being thrown into a world of mystery then thriller with a pinch of suspense and a hint of paranormal; it was truly one-of-a-kind story and I was literally at the edge of my seat. Although it was short, I still felt that it perfectly covered everything needed to turn it into a masterpiece. I am definitely looking forward to read more magnificent work done by this author.

"The story is breath-taking. I don't think there was even a single thing that I disliked in this work of art. From the author's amazing description that made feel myself in the character's shoes to the phenomenal puns and encrypted puzzles that held double meanings, I enjoyed the whole ride this book offered. In a nutshell, it is safe to say that the author had proved to be a capable writer and I wouldn't be surprised if I found published books under the name of this writer with a "best-seller" print on it's cover. Moreover, I can't describe how I felt being thrown into a world of mystery and then thriller with a pinch of suspense and a hint of paranormal; it was truly one-of-a-kind story and I was literally at the edge of my seat. Therefore, I would like to recommend it to anyone who enjoys reading a good short story because it is often a challenge to write a satisfying one. For sure it was short, however, I still felt that it perfectly covered everything needed to turn it into a masterpiece. I am definitely looking forward to read more magnificent work done by this author."

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Six feet under the ground

"The story was well thought of. The words were simple to understand. The plot was simple and direct."

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six feet under

"a very very good novel with very small details of everything and it made me cry"

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Great job

"I really enjoyed reading this, I like your writing style a little too much"

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Great!

"Love the plot, the characters and the writing style:) great book :)"

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Oooo

"This book is amazing so far I love the authors writing style and the plot is really cool, well done!"

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Unsure but good so far

"Still getting to know the story line, would like a little bit more info on what each of their lives are currently like"

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Good short story

"A good short story. The author added all the necessary details in short amount of pages. I liked it"

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Six feet under

"I really liked the suspense right from the start. That's what keeps readers going and makes stories interesting. Being a teenager, imagining what they went through moved me quite well. To be honest, I enjoyed reading it. Furthermore, the horror aspect of the story wasn't so exaggerated so as to make me fall into fear though I was very terrified when Connor hit Ethan with the iron rod . Great work 💪 Keep it up "

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Six feet under

"I really liked the suspense right from the start. That's what keeps readers going and makes stories interesting. Being a teenager, imagining what they went through moved me quite well. To be honest, I enjoyed reading it. Furthermore, the horror aspect of the story wasn't so exaggerated so as to make me fall into fear though I was very terrified when Connor hit Ethan with the iron rod . Great work 💪 Keep it up "

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Six feet under

"I really liked the suspense right from the start. That's what keeps readers going and makes stories interesting. Being a teenager, imagining what they went through moved me quite well. To be honest, I enjoyed reading it. Furthermore, the horror aspect of the story wasn't so exaggerated so as to make me fall into fear though I was very terrified when Connor hit Ethan with the iron rod . Great work 💪 Keep it up "

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Interesting read so far

"I like the plot so far but I'm only a couple chapters in. It's keeping !e on the edge of my seat I can tell you that. "

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The best

"I particularly avoid story plots based on horror.. But this one was just the perfect combination of thrill and horror..❤️ I loved it.💜"

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