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Why did you say goodbye?

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Summary

Aiden is a 22 year old boy. He is going thru a break up with his Boyfriend, Toby 23y/o. And Aiden sees that Toby has moved on. He gets sad and Toby secretly also regrets breaking up. This is a sad romance.

Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Aiden's POV

-Why did you leave me? Can't you see that I'm broken? After all of these years...-

Was my thoughts, My Boyfriend broke up with me.. his name was Toby...

I've known him for 4 Years now. He says he don't want me in his life no more.. after the break up...

I laid in the bed, Crying.

I couldn't do anything else.

He was my love...

It was the happiesst years of my life though...

He was the person bringing joy into my life.

Tears falling, falling and falling down...

I'm down on my knees again crying.. that was the first thing I did when he broke up...

When he said the words..:

"I'm Breaking Up with you"

It stung me thru the heart...

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155 Words! Did yall like this sad romance? Or Like the first chapter? Ik, its sad. But plz like, comment on it!

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Wow poor aiden but this is great so far keep up the good work

4 years

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