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Senseless

"I had a feeling she put that baby in the washer. Horribly psychotic."

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Love this beautiful bible

"I loved everything about it great work love kee up the great work"

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Gosh

"I knew it. When I read through the middle chapters about Scarlet going through her laundry, I had an inkling about it! Then I forgot about it as she seemed to really search for him with all the emotional anxiety she was going through. I have to admit, the ending was a blow to the gut. I was reading your book in the mall waiting for my mom, and even being in the noisy environment of a salon, I could not help the shiver from running down my back. Great job, really. "

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Wow!

"I was caught off guard with how much twists and turns and how much i loved the story! Great job, i can’t wait to read more from you"

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A masterpiece I don't like

"I didn't like this story. At all. So why give it a perfect rate, then? Simple, because this is not a story I was meant to like. Readers who actually enjoy dark stories may like it, but for me those kinds of stories leave a feeling in me as though my heart is being crushed by some heavy object. And this book did that from start to end. Therefore, even though I don't like it, calling this story anything less than a masterpiece would be doing it a disservice. The whole book tries to justify the protagonist's actions, and it all feels wrong because no matter how much I try to get in her shoes, I cannot even understand her rationale, which makes sense since she's messed up to begin with. And then the realisation dawns on me (not going to spoil it for you) and everything makes sense. Therefore, I can confidently say, this is the first time I have read a masterpiece I don't like."

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Loved reading your story.

"The story was full of suspense. I couldn't story reading. Everything was perfect. Loved reading this story. Thank you, author. For such an amazing story."

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review

"a truly magnificent writing style! Your use of grammar and punctuation was great, and the vocabulary was apt for the story, A great read."

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Stories to make you think

"Many questions but short stories are supposed to intrigue and this one did. Very dark and readers must be warned beforehand but for anyone who reads this type of fiction, this one would surely grab their attention."

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Great short story

"It was a sad story that I won’t be able to get out of my head now lol it was well written though!"

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Woah...

"I was confused at first about where the story was going. Only to later find out that this character is genuinely messed up. The author’s style is descriptive, I just wish there was a little more detail. Overall it was enjoyable and the ending left me wanting more. "

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Senseless

"I like the book it was sad though and unfair also some questions went unanswered "

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