What is your opinion?
City of Fog
"Plot is promising and quite interesting. Execution improves as you read on. I hope the plot thickens and plot hole reduce. Grammar is good. Writing style could use a little polishing. Keep up the good work. "
Interesting
"I am not for sci-fi stories but I enjoyed this one. It has interesting plot and nice written characters. Also, in general your writing style is very unique. And I like it. "
Unique and interesting premise
"It really is a unique read. I enjoyed the scifi elements provided in the story. Especially the setting is a spectacular one. Hope to see the continuation of this series. "
Interesting
"Your story was promising, if a little fast-paced for my tastes. The details you included and the characters you described are great, and I love the plot. There are a lot of punctuation errors, but that's okay you can always go over them. I really liked your idea for this story and had a lot of fun reading it; great work:)"
Good story!
"Your characters are vibrant and relatable,, and I love that! There are lots of grammatical errors and misspellings but that’s okay. Is this a first draft? If so it’s really good! (My first drafts are always messy lol)"
