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Very interesting!

"I loved the female lead in such a part! Definitely promising story! "

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Love it!

"Absolutely love it! So mysterious and a very good plot, makes the readers wanting more, right up my alley! Keep it up 😊"

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Phoenix

"Okay so this is a really good book even though it ain't finished yet. Clara seems....Clara? Yh you guys should read this. You won't regret it. It's sthn different from the norm. Xoxo"

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Pheonix

"I love this! I love that the female lead is a tough one and you really know how to hook a reader!! Can't wait to read the rest!"

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Caught My Interest

"The story caught my interest right away. It has a very unique style and I'm excited to see where it goes!"

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Phoenix

"Just the first chapter and I'm already hooked 😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍 Great work 👍💜👍 -Kookie 🍪💕"

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A Great First Chapter!

"It is no easy feat to write a gripping start to a story, but this author not only does it, but does a great job with description and painting a picture for the reader. If the rest of the story is like the beginning, this is on its way to being a great book!"

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GREAT WORK

"This prologue is really good I'm interested in what going to happen next great start loving it so far."

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Pheonix

"Great start. Just hoping the author can give more chapters so I won't leave with suspends. The writing style used is easily understood and wish I can read more chapters."

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Sharply Drawn

"Although I've only read one chapter, the sharply drawn, compelling protagonist makes this story already worthy of its fiery name. The internal dialogue is intense and places the reader directly into the vibrant world of Phoenix. I can't wait for updates! My only concern is the grammar, as there's a noticeable shifting between the past and present tense."

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I love playing with Fire!🔥 And this IS Fire!

"I’m a supporter! I’ve only read the first chapter so far, nonetheless this story seems promising. The character is…well, full of character, one we love to relate with, sort of a sexy behavior, with hints of coolness and boldness at the same time. Yet, we can feel a slight defensiveness, got the brains when facing danger! Excellent! 1 st voice! Interesting and very rhythmic. I can’t wait to read more of this newly discovered (for my case) writer! Well done! Am sold❤️‍🔥"

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THIS IS SO GOOD!

"This was such a great read! I cant wait for another chapter!"

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Amazing!

"I loved reading yet another one of your amazing stories. Keep up the great work!"

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Interesting!!

"It's a very interesting plot. What I liked so far is that the author has been able to maintain the mystery that surrounds these characters. It has certainly poked my curiousity bear and I can't wait to find out what happens next!! Keep up the good work ❤️"

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Vivid

"The writer does a great job of painting a vivid picture. Not too much is given away which has piqued my interest. Keep the chapters coming. This was a good start👍"

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