What is your opinion?
Lost in Maverine
"It is quite a delightful piece to read if we consider the book's wonderful plot, it's detailed description and flawless grammar and it was quite enjoyable as well as the chapters were short and didn't bored me. The story about a girl named Anne going to a Land named Maverine with a friend who's a scarecrow and her facing the obstacles in between of the journey themselves are some points quite intriguing but what I would like to suggest the author is that, that the things can take time and happen more naturally. Sometimes it is possible that the authors might be so into writing the story or maybe out of ideas that the plot gets a bit abrupt. I felt the same in some parts. But I feel there is a lot of scope and potential for your book and If you revise your chapters a bit, than your book can be nothing less of a worth than a diamond. Well just wanted to let you know that you might have to add more space between different paragraphs as they are jointed. Anyways, Keep up the good work ^_^"
Enticing
"It's an interesting read. A typical "Alice in wonderland" story - or in this case, 'Anna in wonderland'. For a fourteen years old, you did a great job bringing that mystery world to life in a book. Keep up the good work."
