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Really enjoying this love story

"Really like this story so far. I hope Mia has her happy ending "

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Loved it 😎

"I don't know what to say. I've written over 50 reviews about nearly every genre here on inkitt. But always am surprised to find a book that tops another one. Like this book it's amazing and thrill riding. I could read it over and over again and not be tired of it."

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Great Writing Style

"It's been a while since I've enjoyed a writing style quite this much. It's very professional and blunt, quite a different style than what most authors follow. I can't help but want to read it just by your writing style You've also got great plot. It kept me hooked for a long while and I kept wanting to read more. Combined with your great writing style, the book is a great one. I have really enjoyed the story so far and will continue to read it."

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Intriguing From the Very Beginning

"So far I've only read the first two chapters for this book, but I'm already hooked on it. The plot seems simple but with just enough mystery to make the reader want to find the answer to the questions they make without the story becoming overwhelming. The writing style is simple and elegant, vibrant but not overly pompous. Great call on the use of italics to easily tell reality from dreamscape apart. I'll definitely follow this story as it progresses. It promises to be quite the gem! Keep up the great job!"

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Who does she truly love?!

"I have fully enjoyed this love triangle! Each guy seems perfect for her. I cant imagine leaving home to go that far away for college and getting swooped into such an exciting and scarey life! My only hold back is eventually, maybe 75 pages in, was a description of her having dark hair. An eloquent description of what she looks like at the very beginning would help us know what she truly looks like and hook us then."

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"It was way too quick for my liking but overall it’s promising."

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