What is your opinion?
Lax AF for a horror
"So when I was reading I thought since the genre was horror there was going to be a slow beginning that grows into creepy to gory horror. But instead, I just feel meh through the entire thing. Especially at the end where you're making the mc just run. Like, focusing on the breath or the fact of why she's running. Go into deep details of the character's physical descriptions. But everything else about your book is alright. The plot is not good but like writing style is great and grammar and all that are pretty good with like a couple of mistakes. With that said to keep writing you are obviously a very smart person so I bet if you just work on this book a bit more it'll be the scariest novel here on inkitt."
Review Exchange
"The plot itself is good but I'd say your biggest issue lies in layout. The paragraphs, without proper spacing, looks like one giant passage and quite frankly, put me off. I found myself wishing to just skim through it instead of really reading. The writing also has quite a few grammar and punctuation mistakes. A quick edit should fix it all. Proper layout is really important to engage a reader and I say it from personal experience, if I don't see proper paragraphs with good spacing, I lose my eagerness to read the novel. Improving those, and correcting the a few spelling and grammar mistakes should improve the story a lot."
