What is your opinion?
Great
"So I've reviewed stories from one chapter to up to 90 and the similarity of the both of them is that every word is impactful in some way. I mean by this that the author has already shown us quite a bit with one chapter. Now it took me a week to get to it but now I have a regret. Lol. I should have read it sooner and I want to read more. I want to see these characters grow and show me a few twists. Oh, and before I continue, when I review stories, I base it on what I've read. So the grammar and writing style was good. I think that was truly extraordinary. But the plot is a 2 star because there is not a lot of plot to go off of as of right now. So with that said I think it's only fair to give it a two-star until the story grows. And I want to see that. Hopefully, this will be motivation. P.s. I loved the story. I hope you continue writing. And that many readers get to see your imagination."
A Captivating Story!
"I have reviewed alot of stories here on inkitt but i will have to say that yours really is something! The grammar and the choice of vocabulary are almost perfect. The story is descriptive and well written. There is just one thing that I would like to put forth, that as a reader i felt a lack of sentiments in the story. You should try giving a better emotional perspective to the reader. The story anyways, is amazing. Kudos!"
