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Anam Ahmed
solemnly.
A Captivating Story!
I have reviewed alot of stories here on inkitt but i will have to say that yours really is something! The grammar and the choice of vocabulary are almost perfect. The story is descriptive and well written. There is just one thing that I would like to put forth, that as a reader i felt a lack of sentiments in the story. You should try giving a better emotional perspective to the reader. The story anyways, is amazing. Kudos!
Read the story nowengaging
If I am being honest,I love the fact that amidst the casual talk of the characters LouMars is giving the readers a reality check. I found the story very thought-provoking and capturing. I love the concept that is being forth under the story of the protagonist. I hope to have this one my bookshelf one day!!
Read the story nowcaptivating!!
First of all i love the way the writer starts off her chapter with that piece of poetry. It gives such an insight to what the story is going to about. I love the character of William and I can't wait for the story to unveil so we know why he is so pessimistic in love. Kudos for writing this!!
Read the story nowAn Intriguingly Beautiful Story
First of all, I will have to say that I love the title of your book. It is immediately captivating!! The story in itself is beautifully written and the details are sketched nicely. Grammar and punctuation are on point and the sentences are structured well. I will definitely stay in touch to read more of what you write!!
Read the story nowVery Well Written
This is probably the first novel that I am granting all five stars too. It is truly very well written. So far I have read the first two chapters and I believe that the author is taking the story forward well. It has the perfect blend of emotions and the characters are very elaborate. Kudos to writing this!
Read the story nowCreative.
First of all i would like to appreciate the summary that you put forth to represent this collection. It captivated me! I have read your stories and what i love is that you have a diversity of plots to write about. It is amazing! I have a few suggestions to make though that I would post on your wall for you too see. Kudos!
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