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Nice plot

"Nice plot We'll written "

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I see you.

"Please update the holiday season is over. We are missing the story "

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REVIEW

"I'd highly recommend this story to all. It's a really good one. I was gripped from just he first chapter. Plus, I loved that the author uses present continuous tense to tell this story. Like a script. I could imagine easily every single scene."

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Captiving and realistic. Love it!

"I definitely recommend this book because it has the right balance of fluff and spicy time and a lot of communication between the characters involved. There is a growth of the "protagonist", and this is really nice in a novel because it shows how the writer is really thinking about the story and the realism of the situation. "

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Give us more

"Love this story. Great writing. Electrifying, suspenseful, soldering, emotional. Please give us an update. Or write something else. Your fan"

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I see you

"I love this story! Please keep going you're an amazing writer! "

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Just Amazing

"I'm in LOVE with this book! I just can't stop reading it because I'm excited what will happen next and then some scenes I'm reading over and over again! It's not boring like so many other books I readed because there is more content then just the dirty parts. I can just recommend this book to everyone with good taste :)"

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I see you

"Such an amazing book, literally love it so much your doing an amazing job and I can’t wait to see where it goes!!"

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I See You

"I love the relationship between the two main characters and how the dynamic is a dominant/submissive relationship and how the submissive isn’t the typical soft, small person you typically read in such novels. I love the characteristics of all the characters. Reading Xavier’s struggle with following his heart or his brain, Adrian’s determination and how enamoured he is with the struggles man. I would recommend this to literally anyone and everyone "

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X+A

"This was literally amazing and I loved it so much. I cannot wait for the next chapters this was literally the best and a very good detailed book. That had me on a roller coaster of emotions<33"

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Awesome

"It's my first time reading mxm and it's amazing....the way it's written is amazing...... overall i am in love with the main characters.... please keep writing i am looking forward to it "

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I see you

"I liked the whole book"

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Steamy

"Very interesting "

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Weird and Wonderfull

"Love it thus far. Can't wait for updates. 😍❤️❤️❤️"

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Good book

"It's good read so fae"

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Very Interested in Continuing

"I am in love with the chemistry between the MCs. It's funny, sweet, sexy, and intriguing. I even learned a little bit for interactions in my own attempt at a M/M, so I'm grateful for that. From the dialogue to the slow-building relationship between the two, it's all very believable and delightfully charming. I am definitely looking forward to more and highly recommend to anyone who enjoys this genre."

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Great Dynamic Duo

"For the story itself, I like what is going on but since this is the first erotica that I've ever read I have to say that it's not what I thought erotica would be. Like I thought fifty shades of gray dirty where the whole story was about sex. But this one has a plot to it and I find it interesting and pulled me in."

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Great Read

"I like the clear showcase of the character’s interpersonal relationships as well as the natural dynamics presented through every chapter."

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I see you

"It's great"

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Entertaining read

"Firstly, I haven't read many b×b stories but I really liked the plot. The chemistry between two lead characters was steaming. What I found more interesting was the prologue. It's surely set in near future and it would be fun and entertaining to see Xavier's journey from denial to surrender. Also, the suspense in this story is well executed to captivate the audience. Overall, it's a great read. Keep up the good work!!!"

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