What is your opinion?
Brilliant and Emotional.
"This story captures the struggles of Kashmiries so elegantly. Its so expressive and detailed, I felt like I knew every character personally. I could visualize every scene, place myself there, and imagine the character's agony. It is so well written, that I almost feel sorry for Anam, as she can not read it herself for the first time."
Page turning!!!
"No idea where to start. The beginning had me hooked quite literally. The plot is amazingg and well paced. "A smile is merely a declaration of life". Ughhh!!! Waiting for the next chps."
master piece ❤️
"Everything in this is just on point , I can't complain for anything. I can read it unlimited times. I just love the writing the way it is written, a very thanks to (anum ahmed- the writer of this masterpiece) ❤️"
Beautiful story
"Really beautiful story. The literature and vocabulary used made the story more heart touching. would recommend to anyone who is trying to expand their vocabulary or just want a good read!"
Favourite.
"The doctrine of love is one of my most favourite reads. It has so much emotions attached to it. Not only is it amazingly well written, it also very truly depicts the situation on going in IOK. Nothing short of a masterpiece."
EPIC!
"First of all... this is one of THE BEST novels I’ve read in a while. The setting, the characters, the plot everything is a 10/10. I can’t wait to read more of it. I would totally recommend this to anyone who loves to read a good of literature!"
Loved it
"I liked the characters and the world-building. It's very well crafted and would recommend it to others."
Emotional
"Emotional, raw, well crafted story. The author work flows beautifully. 10/10 would recommend"
LOVE ITTTT!
"It's such an incredible novel. Emotional, well-written, full of suspense. A must read...Good Job!"
The Doctrine of Love
"Wow. Just...wow. As a Pakistani, I greatly respect you for putting this out there. The world needs to hear what Kashmiris go through every single day. It's a devastating reality, yet few people seem to really know about it. Thank you again for expressing all of this in your story. I love that you stressed about the importance of remembering Allah (SWT), and also how you integrated Urdu into the characters' dialogue. Both the religion and language deserve recognition. Now, on the technical writing skills, I have a few points to make. 1. Try to proofread your chapters before uploading them. Finding grammatical errors scattered here and there might make the more picky readers put the book down. Books that are written with proper grammar often get more reads. 2. Try to stay consistent with tenses. If you're writing in the present tense, stay in the present tense and avoid switching to the past wherever possible. 3. Try to make your descriptions more detailed. The more descriptive your writing, the more your readers will feel as if they are there in the story, watching from the sidelines. That is an important skill to acquire as a writer. To sum it all up, I love where you're going with this, and the reason I wrote all the above feedback is for you to get as many reads as possible. Keep doing what you're doing and I wish you all the best with your story. Kashmir and Pakistan Zindabad."
The Doctrine of Love
"Wow. Just...wow. As a Pakistani, I greatly respect you for putting this out there. The world needs to hear what Kashmiris go through every single day. It's a devastating reality, yet few people seem to really know about it. Thank you again for expressing all of this in your story. I love that you stressed about the importance of remembering Allah (SWT), and also how you integrated Urdu into the characters' dialogue. Both the religion and language deserve recognition. Now, on the technical writing skills, I have a few points to make. 1. Try to proofread your chapters before uploading them. Finding grammatical errors scattered here and there might make the more picky readers put the book down. Books that are written with proper grammar often get more reads. 2. Try to stay consistent with tenses. If you're writing in the present tense, stay in the present tense and avoid switching to the past wherever possible. 3. Try to make your descriptions more detailed. The more descriptive your writing, the more your readers will feel as if they are there in the story, watching from the sidelines. That is an important skill to acquire as a writer. To sum it all up, I love where you're going with this, and the reason I wrote all the above feedback is for you to get as many reads as possible. Keep doing what you're doing and I wish you all the best with your story. Kashmir and Pakistan Zindabad."
Terrific work!
"A powerful yet emotional story laced with intellectual phrases! The plot is really interesting and engrossing. The character of Gul Bano drawn in the main essentials is portrayed explicitly and elaborately. The death of Sofia Ben struck my chord. The tone and tenor of the story are up to the mark. Pacing and momentum are well maintained. No cliches and redundancies were witnessed throughout the story. Impeccable Grammar and Punctuation retain the flow. The dialogue flow between the characters is very natural. This story is admirable in all parameters and a must-read for literary enthusiasts. All in all, a wonderful piece with plenty of emotions!"
FABULOUS 🥵🤍
"I ABSOLUTELY LOVE ITTT.. Its amazing.. Its emotional.. IT IS EVERYTHING I WAS LOOKING FOR IN A BOOK😭😭🤍🤍"
A heartwrenching tale
"Anyone who reads this would feel the pain the characters feel, the loss they go through, their anger, their helplessness and would themselves pray for them to come out victoriously and be able to lead a normal life of their own someday. The stories of Kashmir with different perspectives should be encouraged as it gives a different picture about everything going on. And so I would definitely recommend this book and advice the readers to be open minded while reading it and give it a chance. I guess the story is still not complete. I would take the chance and read it as it goes on. "
Absolutely great!
" Though I don’t like the dramatic and thrilling novels. Yet your writeup has changed my mind. You have a great writing skills. Keep up the great work! & Waiting for more chapters♥️"
Stunning!!
"Woahh! What an articulation! The way sentences are structured is matchless. Elaboration of emotions is nicely mentioned."
Astonishing
"The way you have written is mind-blowing. Every word, every emotion, every pain, I'm speechless. Never stop writing. You're amazing 🤩"
PHENOMENAL WRITING
"This novel had me right from the beginning. The writing, the vocabulary, the imagery and the entire plot itself is heart wrenchingly beautiful. And this story is not just any story this is the REALITY for many people and the way the author coveys the emotions is extremely impressive! Good job and never stop writing! One day you'll for real get your rightful place among the most beloved authors of today's time because you're already on your way!! "
Masterpiece✨
"The Story is Absolutely a Stunner and the Way She has Presented it So Far has made it a Masterpiece Already.The issues hightailed are explained so professionally with a Blend of Suspense that one can just read and read it without being tired of it💖Author indeed is A Gifted Writer+Storyteller And Kudos to Her for such Masterpiece.Eagerly waiting for more chapters💫As A Bookworm,I Hope this gets published one day when it gets complete:-)"
Appreciated
"This is amazing the way everything is written out is so well I love how the author gives the characters many details and actually has them face real world issues.There writing skills are so good too I can’t see a single issue.It's more relatable than I thought it would be.. "
