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tales of the underdog: unfiltered, unedited, biblical spoken word poetry anthology

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an anthology of poems This is different from most of my work as I have been writing during fragile time for me personally, I've been listening to a lot of gospel music so hopefully you will dig that it has had an influence on my work as of late. I appreciate everyone who gives this project a chance, as you all graciously have done with my first few,

Genre
Poetry
Author
JustNeyah
Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
7
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

"Peter 5;7"

Father, I reach out to thee in peace

Because I’m tired of my veins filling with envy

Eyeing the worldly possessions of he and she and they

Through much reflectin, I realize that I have taken too much time attempting’ to follow the self servin’ laws of man

I am pleadin, hope you are receiving my proses

Requesting to be given a signal that I am one chosen

For you to prove to me that I a rose, rising, rosen from the ground

An orchid beautiful mysteries unfolding from the ground

Like the Thomas family please show that you are gun-hoing for me now

To stop the thoughts delivered from the enemy to stop having the ability of controlling of me now

Seeking Your wisdom to be consoling of me now

See to it that my soul can’t be sold or stolen from me now

Feel like I lost my first love,

Maybe it wasn’t a loss due to the fact that You she was not raised on or made of

Just wanna be seen as pure love and delivered in Your eyes

Mommy named me in Your honor for it was destined for me,

Destined I be Your child

Mommy said that I am protracted in Your name for you counted the hairs on my head and knoweth of my pain before I exited the womb

I ask that You help me walk with the security that for me my gift will make room

I’m tired of feeling like I’m in it by myself

Walking around stealth about the wealth that is my religion

I hope that in Your eyes, my sins are thrown into the sea and I can rest well knowing I’m forgiven

Ready to cast all of my care upon you,

For it’s I who You

Careth

“Casting all your care upon him; for he careth for you.”

Peter, 5:7









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