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The Lost world

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Summary

Once upon a time there was a 15-year-old girl. she had baby pink  hair. Although she was 15 she had the mind of a 10-year-old. she always believed that unicorns, dragons, mermaids and centaurs were all real. Her name is Anna.

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Complete
Chapters
2
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Part 1



Today I am going to tell you a story about how I became queen of a lost world .


One day anna was out with her family, her mum, dad, sister. they were just walking back to their house from a picnic when anna realised she has left her phone back there. on her way back to the picnic site she slipped and then fell down a whole. This is where anna realised she was no longer in Huawei for the summer holiday. she doesn’t know where she is. The new land looks just like a place in her children’s books. just like a lost world. The place in the books had pink trees and a nice and cramming warful. however, this world has a different sound then the last one. a bit like a horse just different.


When anna was exploring the lost world, she came across a village but this village didn’t have people it had centaurs. centaurs are a Greek mythology tale. Many people believed they weren’t real. The village of centaurs seemed quite friendly to anna so she went over. however, when she tried to enter the village she got stopped by the 2 centaurs at the front of the village because there was a funeral going on because the queen centaur has died due to her age. most centaurs die when they have been alive for several hundred years. Once the funeral has finished anna was allowed to enter the village. she went strait to the king and asked “what is this place and how did I get here, and sorry for your loss” anna was very scared and worried. she just wanted to get back to her world. the king centaur replied with” this place is called the lost world in the lost world all the mythical creatures such as the unicorns, dragons, mermaids and last of all the centaurs. you can get out but it takes a long time, are you up for it” “yes I will do anything to be with my family “said anna with a very determined look in her eyes. “we will leave tomorrow because it is starting to get dark “said the king centaur. as anna was being showed where she would sleep, she felt happy here like she didn’t want to leave. She finally felt like she was at home. with all the mythical creatures around here, she felt ecstatic.


In the morning the king centaur was waiting for her outside her little hut with a lot of other centaurs, which actually looked kind a scary. Anna got on the king centaur and they went of into the sun raise. When they reached the land of the mermaids she got off the king and was told they can’t go any further because they can’t go into others land anna respected that. anna slowly stepped into the ocean . when the water was waist height she felt a tingle and then she floated out of the water and when anna looked down she had a mermaid tale. She instantly realised that is why her mum and dad never let her go in the water if it could go waist height . anna went and thanked the centaurs for everything they have done. She then turned and swam off into the deepest part of the ocean . that is were the centaurs told anna were the mermaids live it is called Atlantis


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very imaginative start.

4 years

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