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Great Short Horror
"Whoa, I like it! I like how you made the horror inscreasing incident by incident. I actually didn't expect that ending, which is a good thing :) The words you used are simple, so the story was really easy to understand, despite of one typo I found. (You might want to check it out. Sorry for not pointing it out!) The way you divided the story into incidents is unique and I like it. Anyway, this will be one of the horror short stories I would recommend :) Regards, Kei Angelus"
Bubbles
"I found the story had me but I wanted to know more in depth analysis of the narrative and I think for a story it was good even excellent but I might have wanted a novel which it was not. But it had clarity and it had drama."
