What is your opinion?
Good story
"I loved the plot it needs a few touches but its a good read"
Her throne
"Fast read, good story, needs a good edit. Will happily read the next one "
Her Throne
"The Author has a great idea for a story, and I can't wait to see how it fully develops. I'd like to give the author some advice though. For one, the author makes use of a lot of commas, even putting them in places where there are meant to be full stops. Secondly, the author needs to take notes of their spellings. There are times when they make use of phone-text shorthand, and it is a little off putting. Thirdly, the author needs to build the novel's world. There are lots of dialogues and less of world building. I want to understand the type of environment the characters live in so I can easily get their discussions. Fourth, the author tells instead of showing. Although this rule is not one that must be followed, as there are exceptional authors who forsake the rule of showing and not telling, I do believe it can only be done if you have an exceptional skill of narration. I usually try to avoid doing so in my writing, as I have been told it can easily bore the readers. Fifth, the use of small letters. There are several instances where the author makes use of small letters to start a paragraph. It can be off putting. Overall, I believe that the author should properly go through this story and edit it well, taking their time. This story has an excellent plot and shouldn't be taken for granted."
Good
"This novel lacks detail otherwise it is quite interesting and the storyline is good. You definitely will make a good writer one day.🤗"
Could be good but needs work
"This book as promised. I think the spelling and grammar needs a lot of work but the underlying story is good. With some character development and more depth of writing it could be good "
