What is your opinion?
Interesting concept
"So the idea of the entire book is original and a very fun thing to think about. Imagine if your first love, your "first time" and blam have to marry that person. I was laughing because my friend had just told me about his first time and how he hated it. Lol. But I wish there were more of a reason why the law exists where you have to marry the first person you exchange a sexual experience with. With that said the formatting was terrible and the whole thing was just a big block of text. That could easily be fixed so I'm not going to rag on it too much."
TGBA summer, 2022 Judge report.
"Title and prologue is enough to catch a reader's interest, since it is very well written with a unique theme. After chapter 1, the story takes the form of a journal rather than a story. Written in first person, it portrays the feelings of our main lead. The grammatic error like incorrect use of pronouns and paragraph spacing makes it look like a first draft. Though it improves with passing chapters. Taking help from beta readers and using Grammarly can be beneficial."
